Melted

For the next six weeks (leading up to Valentine’s Day) Lonely Author will dedicate most of his posts to his favorite subject; that thing called “Love.”

Melted

We shared glances from a distance
Like beacons in a crowded room
Our bodies gravitated to the center
fingers entwined like bride and groom
dance floor darkened like the universe
yet I found myself basking in her light
cheek to cheek we swayed in unison
flames of passions dancing with delight

Intoxicated by her scent skin and touch
was she feeling the wonders that I felt
adjoining hearts performed a sweet ballet
I shrunk inside my shirt my pants my belt
suddenly she was no longer in my arms
lights go on as the music is finally done
finding our empty shoes I suddenly realize
this beauty and I slowly melted into one

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154 thoughts on “Melted

  1. Another little known fact about this Southern lass … Valentine’s Day is my second favorite day of the year. I love your romantic aptitude and attitude. Smiles.

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  2. Lovely write. It put me into a nice romantic mood and then your friend there with his comments and your answers just put me into a hilarious mood and I had to re-read the piece again to salvage some romance mindset. I agree with Darshith, you ought to write more often on love and more poetry. You’re really good at it ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Ah, love! I suppose after Christmas is over there isn’t much else until maybe Halloween and we can write about ghosts and goblins, or perhaps how patriotic we are for all those military holidays. Anyway, you’ve done a quite vivid presentation on that kind of ‘love at first sight’ feeling.

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  4. Romance is my kryptonite. It provides a sense of emotional balance to my physical world. It slows my heart rate as I ponder and smile and then accelerates it with passion. It is an experience I live for every day.
    Thank you for giving me a moment to have and share this experience.

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  5. ah! Valentines Day for all the lovers in this world. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Beautifully & greatly written.

    My favorite lines:

    dance floor darkened like the universe
    yet I found myself basking in her light
    cheek to cheek we swayed in unison
    flames of passions dancing with delight

    You sooth the gentleness & embrace the love and souls of the universe. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. love has own beauty or beauty forces to fall in love.so these two words is melted in each other.m i right. mere mahboob na jaa;aaj ki raat na jaa.hone waali he sahar;thori der thahar……….a love song in hindi/urdu on velentine day for my hubby.search d meanings of dt lines.

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  7. plz o lonely auther !! i want to publish my new poem in hindi/urdu in all magzines n newspapers on 14th feb.my poem” yu hi tamasha” has two parts.in dt one is’before midnight’ n second is ‘raat ki bachi huyi baat’.can u fulfil my dis will.

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